I enjoyed reading your fic. What really stood out to me was the dialogue you've chosen to use. It really put me in the main character's point of view. Good stuff!
Lovelyz stories like this are hard to come by... your chapters so far have been so fun to read ^^ Can't wait to see what you have in store for Jisoo ;)
Dang, I wish I could write as great as you can! Your stories are really good! That dark turn that Naeun had gave me the chills... that was a fun chapter to read!